your offering
like an orange petal cast upon the breeze
surprises me
glimmers in my heart – a web
caught, held, examined
I am dark and multi –faceted
turning inward upon myself
ever striving
you are simple and unfettered
enticing and free
through you
I see differently
Colleen Briggs Art & Writing 
nice. you squeezed every ounce of meaning from each word. Powerful.
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thank you so much for visiting my blog! and I am honored by your comment. also, I love your poem Friday morning – such vivid imagery capturing the simple but profound feeling of gratitude for being alive.
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